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Spook progress

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I forgot to post this here after the last one, completely scrapped the original, wasnt happy with it
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The first thing I notice about this painting is Spy's skin. I love the rich variation in tone and light-play. That is the BEST thing about this. Beautiful. The mask is good too, but could use a little more thickness. Unless it's made out of latex.

Another thing that could improve this is just making sure the neck stands out from collar- right now it's looking 2D.
But most of all, please, PLEASE get to work along the edges with the left-over lines! The worst thing you can let happen after working so hard is forgetting to clean up. That makes it look a little sloppy.

Okay

To end on a positive: You nailed the expression here! The eyes are inline and make sense and the lips are actually holding the cigarette.

All and all, this is really nice Spy portrait!